This is the
fifth batch of design, where I’ve gathered the feedbacks of my classmates and
Alex from the previous design. Few points are noted:
- Redesigned
typography does not work when the characters are assembled into words. Specific
reasons unidentified.
- Combination
of red and dark grey colour scheme gives a relation of communism ideology.
- Tone
of design should be a little lively.
- Chinese
characters should be dominating the English words.
Hence,
according to the opinions, the new batch of design is created.
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Poster/ Batch 4 |
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Card (front)/ Batch 4 |
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Card (back)/ Batch 4 |
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Video No.1/ Batch 5 |
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Video No.2/ Batch 5 |
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Video No.3/ Batch 5 |
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Video No.4/ Batch 5 |
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Video No.5/ Batch 5 |
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Video No.6/ Batch 5 |
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Video No.7/ Batch 5 |
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Video No.8/ Batch 5 |
However, I
am not satisfied with this design yet. I understand that my design skills in
communicating with visuals are not matured yet. Looking back to all the designs
that I have made, coming to this 5th batch, I have not shown very
strong mastery in the area of visual narration. I observed I have come to a
point where things are not going very well because I couldn’t progress much when
working with the visuals. Hopefully, there is a solution for me to come out
from this situation soon.
Every step is
part of the progression. I am learning, I am learning, I am learning.
All is well.