Friday 18 January 2013

How Could I Further Progress? - 5th Batch of Design

This is the fifth batch of design, where I’ve gathered the feedbacks of my classmates and Alex from the previous design. Few points are noted:
  • Redesigned typography does not work when the characters are assembled into words. Specific reasons unidentified.
  • Combination of red and dark grey colour scheme gives a relation of communism ideology.
  •  Tone of design should be a little lively.
  •  Chinese characters should be dominating the English words.
Hence, according to the opinions, the new batch of design is created.

Poster/ Batch 4

Card (front)/ Batch 4

Card (back)/ Batch 4

Video No.1/ Batch 5

Video No.2/ Batch 5

Video No.3/ Batch 5

Video No.4/ Batch 5

Video No.5/ Batch 5

Video No.6/ Batch 5

Video No.7/ Batch 5

Video No.8/ Batch 5

However, I am not satisfied with this design yet. I understand that my design skills in communicating with visuals are not matured yet. Looking back to all the designs that I have made, coming to this 5th batch, I have not shown very strong mastery in the area of visual narration. I observed I have come to a point where things are not going very well because I couldn’t progress much when working with the visuals. Hopefully, there is a solution for me to come out from this situation soon.

Every step is part of the progression. I am learning, I am learning, I am learning.

All is well.